Part 1: Five Minutes Before Closing
Part 1 · 2 min read ·
The woman in the camel coat arrived five minutes before closing and asked for a bus that no longer stopped on our street.
“I don't think the number six comes here anymore,” I said.
She considered this, then pointed at the last almond pastry. “In that case, I'll have that.”
I brought her a glass of water and asked whether there was someone she wanted to call. She opened her coat and showed me a telephone number sewn onto a strip of fabric inside the lining.
“My grandson put it there,” she said. “He worries about me.”
“Would you like me to call him?”
“Yes, please. Tell him I'm having pastry.”
The man answered on the first ring. I gave him the address and told him his grandmother had asked me to call. He said he would come. I handed the phone to her so she could speak to him herself, and she told him not to forget his umbrella.
My name is Eva Shaw. I owned a small bakery with one oven, two tables, and a bell that rang whenever the door opened. The woman introduced herself as Rose. She said she had once lived near the old bus route and had come looking for the building where her sister used to work.
Her grandson arrived wearing a charcoal coat and the expression of someone who had been frightened for longer than the journey. He checked that Rose was comfortable, then turned toward me.
“What do I owe you?” he asked.
“Two dollars for the pastry,” Rose said. “I paid for the water with excellent company.”
He looked at me. “I'm Adrian. Thank you for calling.”
Rose showed him the empty plate. “Eva says the bus has changed.”
“We can look at the new route together,” he said.
I appreciated that he spoke to her, not over her. He asked whether she wanted to leave immediately or finish her water. She chose to finish it. I began wiping the counter while they discussed the building she had been trying to find.
“It was a print shop,” Rose said. “Your aunt worked there before you were born.”
Adrian said he did not remember an aunt working at a print shop. Rose looked at him over the rim of her glass. “That is because you were not born yet.”
He smiled despite himself. I wrapped a second pastry for the walk home, and Rose paid for it with coins she counted carefully onto the counter. Adrian did not take her purse or correct her until she asked whether she had the right amount.
Before leaving, Rose wrote something on the back of the receipt. It was a row of small shapes: a triangle, two circles, and a square with a line through it. She handed the paper to me.
“Do you remember this?” she asked.
“I don't think we've met before.”
“Not you. The building.”
Adrian looked at the marks and shook his head. Rose seemed disappointed, then tucked her hand into his arm. She said she would explain another day.
After they left, I turned the receipt over. The shapes were too deliberate to be a random doodle. Beneath them, almost hidden by the fold, was a date from forty years earlier and the name of my bakery's street.