Omar Brought A Flight Folder To The Clinic's Small Waiting Room
Part 2 · 3 min read ·
On Tuesday, the stockroom smelled of cardboard and lemon floor cleaner. I counted thirty-two polishing wheels twice because my hands would not settle.
Friday was three days away.
I had photographed my demotion sheet, which contained no patient details. I had also copied my employment agreement. Everything else remained inside the clinic.
At nine, Felicity taped a sign beside the fitting room.
Custom Work Records Under Review.
Under that, she had written my name.
“Take it down,” I said.
“Clients deserve to know why bills are delayed.”
“Then put your billing name on it.”
She stepped close enough that only I could hear.
“You can stack boxes here, or you can explain to your next employer why I let you go.”
I returned to the stockroom. On my break, I called a lawyer whose office handled employment and business disputes. I used my own phone outside, beside a parking meter with a bag over its head.
Her name was Nora Pike.
“Tell me what you've seen,” she said. “Keep what you suspect separate.”
So I did.
I told her about seven entries, three finished jobs, and the repeated scanner mark. I told her that missing index cards alone proved nothing. A date could be wrong. An outside maker could have done work I did not know about.
“Good,” she said. “Don't turn a question into a fact.”
She asked about the cleanout notice.
“Get me the exact wording if you can lawfully see it. Don't go hunting through her desk.”
I sent the notice Felicity had pushed beneath my door. It said older delivery packets and loose billing copies would be removed for storage reduction.
Nora booked me for that afternoon.
When I returned inside, Omar was waiting.
He carried a thin folder with neat tabs. His brown coat had a repaired button, and he was offering our receptionist half a packet of crackers.
“I brought my flight folder,” he told me.
“You retired.”
“The habits didn't.”
Felicity called from her office. “I have your receipt, Omar.”
“Wonderful. Please give me a copy.”
She did. He studied it without sitting down.
“That's my signature,” he said.
My stomach sank.
Then he tapped the page.
“From four years ago. I stopped making that loop in my H after my hand surgery.”
“Signatures vary,” Felicity said.
“So do dates. That's why we keep both.”
He asked her to put the account in dispute and stop collection calls while he challenged the charge.
“An unpaid balance can affect future appointments,” she said.
Her gentle voice made it worse.
Omar's smile went away.
“A person should not have to buy an eye that doesn't exist to keep care for the one he has.”
He left with the receipt.
At lunch he called me. I had given him Nora's public office number only after he asked where to take his complaint.
“There's someone else,” he said. “Lila Mercer. We know each other from the low-vision support group at the community center.”
“Please don't share her records with me.”
“I haven't. She wants to share them with the lawyer.”
Lila had received a $3,480 custom-eye charge with an August twelfth delivery date. She had gone to Ireland that month to stay with her sister.
“She says she has boarding passes,” Omar said. “And a picture of herself in Galway holding a terrible fish sandwich.”
For the first time all day, I laughed.
“A photograph alone won't settle it.”
“She knows. She's gathering the rest.”
Nora met me at four in a plain office above a tax preparer. I used paid personal time. I could not afford the lost hours, but I could afford even less to wait.
She read my agreement, my demotion sheet, and the cleanout notice.
“Who pays most of these claims?” she asked.
“Riverbend Benefit Trust. It's a regional benefit plan.”
“Their review team can examine their own payments. Patients can authorize review of their records. Your index may tell them where to look.”
“Felicity thinks it's just paint.”
“What do you think it is?”
I pictured those small paper moons beside the receipt numbers.
“A way to see when an eye actually left my hands.”
Nora nodded.
“Then we explain exactly that. No bigger claim.”
While we spoke, her assistant brought in two signed patient authorizations. Omar had driven Lila downtown.
Lila entered holding her passport wallet. She looked angry and worn out.
“I was across an ocean,” she said. “And apparently I picked up a new eye here.”
Nora asked her to sit.
Then Nora's computer chimed. Riverbend had answered her first message with a request for the disputed delivery receipt.