The Lease Register Had No Place For Her New Amendment
Part 4 · 3 min read ·
I knew the signature. The little break in the last stroke belonged to a pen that had run dry.
But I had never signed that amendment.
It was dated five months earlier. The text said I gave up the existing rinse supply and agreed to pay all use on B6-114, including any connected facilities.
“Including any connected facilities,” I read aloud.
The van seemed smaller around me.
I searched my receipts. On the second monthly water bill, Felicity had asked me to sign that I had received a copy. My pen had skipped at the end of Desrosiers.
I put the receipt beside the amendment on my screen. The same tiny ink spot sat below the same letter.
I wanted to write a long email calling her a thief.
Instead, I wrote: I did not sign or agree to this amendment. Please preserve the original document and its upload history.
Then I called a lawyer.
Dana Park worked out of a small Hilo office above a shop with empty display windows. She offered a paid first meeting Tuesday morning. I brought my box, my laptop, and a list of dates.
“Start with what you know,” she said.
I told her about the public bill, the sublease, and the pipe test.
Then I showed her the receipt and amendment.
“It looks copied,” I said.
“That is something we can examine. First, your lease requires both parties to sign amendments and register them with the owner's office.”
She pointed to the clause.
“Did you receive any notice of this change?”
“No.”
“Did the owner accept it?”
“I don't know.”
“Then let's ask the person who keeps that register.”
I paid a $900 retainer. Dana gave me a receipt before she sent a preservation request to Felicity, her wash company, and the market owner.
She asked them to keep emails, meter records, billing files, access logs, and every version of the amendment.
“Don't argue in the market aisle,” she told me. “Send people here if they ask about the dispute.”
“Can I tell customers I didn't steal?”
“Yes. Tell them the supply is in your registered lease and a review is underway. Keep it short and true.”
That afternoon, Mara met us at the owner's records office.
A clerk brought out the bound lease register. My entry showed my name, stall number, start date, and water allowance. The attached owner copy of my sublease matched mine.
Its old sketch was missing too.
“The annex folder was lost during an office move,” Mara said. “Keoni's original gives us a way to restore it.”
Dana asked about later amendments.
The clerk checked the register, the paper file, and the owner's digital folder.
While we waited, I read my allowance again. Two thousand gallons did not mean I could run a hose all day. Anything over it was my cost. I had bought a shutoff nozzle for that reason and kept a daily work log. I gave Dana the log too. I wanted the review to measure my work as carefully as hers.
“None accepted,” she said.
She signed a statement and gave us copies of the relevant entries.
The market's file service kept an activity log. Mara requested an export from the account provider and shared it with Dana.
The disputed amendment had first been uploaded Sunday afternoon, after I sent my dispute. The user account was Felicity's.
There was no earlier version in the archive. There was no signing record attached to it.
“That doesn't tell us everything,” Dana said. “It does tell us this page wasn't sitting in their system five months ago.”
I laid my receipt down beside it.
“And she had my signature already.”
Mara looked at both pages for a long time.
“Our document examiner will need the originals,” she said.
“You can copy my receipt,” I told her. “I'll keep the original available.”
Outside, rain ran down the office steps. I stood under the awning and called three customers. One agreed to wait. Two had already found other cleaners after hearing that the market might close my stall.
I wrote down the jobs and the amounts. It felt petty until I remembered the investigation fee on Felicity's bill.
She had put a price on every claim. I could keep a record of real losses.
At the van, Dana called me back.
“The owner's governing board is meeting Thursday. Mara can preserve things, but the board has to vote on Felicity's contract.”
“What happens until then?”
“We ask for a written agreement keeping your access and water on.”
Felicity refused it that evening.
Her answer came through Dana, followed by a notice taped to my stall.
It claimed that disputing the amendment broke my lease. It ordered me to remove my property by six the next morning, when the lock would be changed.